Archive: Feb 2019

  1. So you want to hear more about our latest projects?

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    Royal College of Physicians

    Thanks for taking an interest in our most recent campaigns and projects. We’ve most recently been working on a membership campaign for the Royal College of Physicians.

          

    Recently we’ve been sorting through the images from our RCP member shoot. It was a fantastic shoot where I was privileged to meet six amazing Physicians.

    This campaign focuses on showing the RCP’s members as leaders in their field but also as the ones leading the call for more members. This campaign shows the RCP as the dynamic, forward thinking organisation they are – dispelling any myths that it is an ‘old boys club’. The fact that the driving force behind the reasons for joining is the members, allows the RCP to articulate all the benefits of membership without coming across as pompous or ‘chest beating’.

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    It’s been a real honour to see first hand the amazing work the RCP and its members do to ensure the NHS continues to be the true national treasure that it is.

  2. We need to talk about Will…

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    Let me share this little tip that I was lucky enough to receive from a friend… ­

    You can remove ‘Will’ from virtually all marketing and it’s suddenly snappier, more assertive and more present. Let me show you…

     

    “RCS Affiliate membership will support you throughout your training.”

    Change to

    “RCS Affiliate membership supports you throughout your training.”

     

    Our new chocolate bar will delight the tastebuds and will fill you full of amazing anti-oxidants and superfoods!

    Change to

    Our new chocolate bar delights the tastebuds and fills you full of amazing anti-oxidants and superfoods!

     

    Once you enter our competition you will be in with a chance to WIN an amazing NEW iPad mini.

    Change to

    Enter our competition and you’ve a chance to WIN an amazing NEW iPad mini.

     

    You see the trouble with ‘Will’ is that implies an indeterminate time in the future, he’s just that little bit vague. Once you get rid of him you are subtly leading the reader to believe they have already engaged with you, that this is all happening right now.  So fire away at Will it’s time to get rid of him!

     

    Do you have a copywriting conundrum that you need a little help with? If so, send it to me emma@mulberryadvertising.co.uk

    Plus if  your copy is selected to be used as an example in our Juicy News copywriting article (and you’re happy for it to be shown) – I will re-write anything up to 500 words for free!

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